Nah, this just flat out fucking rules. The art you did for it is really amazing; even having seen some of the WIP posts I'm really blown away by how well it came together.
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I really enjoyed the character dynamics too. In some ways, it felt like we almost knew more about Jan than about Bao. We got to see both how other people view her and, in those last moments, a glimmer of who she is inside.
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Bao, on the other hand, is so consumed internally by how she's seen from the outside that even though she's completely single minded it's hard to disentangle her desires from her paranoia.
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