INCREDIBLE story. One for the mind control bad end sickos. She's seriously underselling both how mean (pos) it is and how good it is - the prose goes hard as hell for 13000 words straight, which is no mean feat, and it ends on one of the most virtuosic sections of mind control writing I've ever read

April 08, 2026 - 04:58 UTC

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It's *literally* about a snake witch knightbreaking usurper empress. Like cmon. Calliebait
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KALLIE, seriously, your comments on this one have been so, so sweet and insightful.

I'm glad when anyone enjoys my work, but taking the time and energy to provide such specific analysis and appreciation for my prose is the sort of thing that keeps me doing this~ Thank you again!
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The pleasure is all mine, I promise!! <3
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Oh, I see two of my fave words together (bad end) and I am activated.
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